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JAMES RICHARDS
i found the second viewing of this film much more enjoyable than the first. when i arrived there was a DJ playing music loudly one room away, and since the video was right at the entrance it was quite noisy, as well as busy with the door opening and closing quite frequently. this meant the whole experience felt really disjointed and frustrating. so much that i almost left. i found the photos of the sandpapered out explicit images a bit uncontroversial and trying, and the erotic video pieces with the flowers a bit derivative / nonsense. the sound in the film was fantastic, and although there was some competition from outside, there were parts that really made an impact on me. the sounds involving water and movement were incredible and i really wanted to hear it properly so i went back for a second viewing at the end which i'm very glad i did. the sandpapered images made a bit more sense and i liked it - it was interesting how you almost couldn't look away - you were made to look at these images that essentially weren't there. i think i read about richards saying the film was about the act of looking. so with these you're urged to search and stare into something quite limited. i also loved the scene with entwined arms rolling over the floor - no head or body etc, but just these arms. but the highlight for me was the last few minutes with the budgie - this very much felt like the crescendo of the piece. both the audio and visual parts became more intense, louder, more aggressive, disorientating, out of control, even beautiful. the images came up in quick succession like slides, and you had a continuous clicking along with a build up of noise, and finally really bass heavy thuds near the end. the music reminded of pete swanson (ex yellow swans) who makes this mash of beautiful noise under layers of other noise and often with 160bpm percussion running through it. for me this was the most affecting piece in the whole prize and for that i think richards deserves to win - it was the only thing that really made me feel something.
TRIS VONNA MICHELL
before i went to the exhibition from the reading i'd done this guy sounded proper mental, all fast talking, talking about his past and childhood, where he grew up... are the stories real or part of an imagination, a trick even. i was prepared to interested but i was completely underwhelmed by the whole thing. it felt predicable, disconnected and strangely impersonal considering it was meant to be a story about himself. the narration felt forced and the video and slides an after thought. the whole thing was also a bit frustrating and honestly by the end i hated him. if he was there i would have given him a scrunched up nose face before slowly backing out of the room, making sure he saw me, like i was washing off residue on my hand from a bin bag or eating something out of date by mistake
CIARA PHILIPS
if von michel was bad but frustrating, philips made me feel nothing at all. i almost walked through without stopping. i don't want to take anything away from the process of what happened ('social activism', 'grass roots movements' etc) with her work but it almost felt like she'd forgotten to take her art for the show with her. it was incredibly banal and lifeless. okay, nice colours, that's all you got? the spoken word piece in the booth… like, c'mon. you shouldn't get nominated let alone shortlisted for this kind of work. at least in the photos it made the coloured screen prints (floor to ceiling) look kinda cool and fun, but in person it felt like a substandard degree show. a bit embarrassing.
DUNCAN CAMPBELL
overall i thought his film (it for others) was pretty good if not a little self indulgent at just under an hour long. i'm quite interested in frankfurt school / horkheimer etc - and this is pretty much the crux of the film. the ownership of images and the narratives that come from it. but here campbell seems to make the film almost impossible to follow in an effort to make sure we knew it was an 'art film', something that was worthy of being shown in the turner. and i kinda hated it for that. but the film was much more subtle that i was anticipating, and different to the impression i initially had from reading about the piece. less a 'scathing attack' on the british museum and more a critique on western museum practices in general - if anything, a much wider concept and argument about the appropriation of african art and how institutions give their invented story to a historical object now outside its original surroundings. i thought the final IRA piece, about how images from the troubles were used for political and emotional purposes, and how we can't always trust images, was also excellent. i liked the ballet piece, even if it seemed drawn out. the piece involving soup cans tested my patience. and i think that was characteristic of the entire piece. it was on that line between being interesting in a challenging way, and being deliberately evasive. i wouldn't say i enjoyed it, and i definitely didn't have a eureka moment like during the richards film. but it was an intelligent and challenging film, and for it to be a nominee when you consider what else has been lately, i applaud.
but the use of the film in this way comes with baggage. french artist chris marker's film statues also die was about the colonisation of africa and the commercialisation of its art and campbell openly shows that he sees his film as a response to it, but it almost comes across as a riff on a classical piece of political cinema. the ballet was choreographed by michael clark, the images archival for the IRA and some of the african sections of the film. i suppose it feels like taking cues from someone else's creativity. it feels a bit secondhand. other peoples photographs, films, dance, ideas.
more generally i am a little concerned if this is the best of what british contemporary art has to offer. all a bit timid and sterile. i don't want to be shocked i want to be moved. if it were up to me i'd probably just give the prize to howard hodgkin again

slides from the second room for richards

crappy walls from phillips

the board outside where you could comment. in fact i think the board should win