Writers Group

[bels]

New list is

Stingray
Schia
Not Syek
Odradek
Molasses
Sister Ray (???)
RJB
Maj
Ramseams
+ Dwindles
+ Smiles

Don't think I'm missing anyone...

[smiles]

i wanna try

[bels]

I guess schia has been busy with work? Sure she has good reasons. Feel uneasy assigning someone else on top of her. It's not like we're in a hurry. Maybe we should increase the time limit to a week?

[schiaparelli]

i am so sorry. yes. i am working on it. yes. work. SORRY I'M DOING IT YES PLEASE DON'T REASSIGN THANKS

[bels]

Excellent work schia, knew you'd be a good choice.

i say we increase the time limit to a week then. Who do you nominate next?

[schiaparelli]

bela, i want you to be my mentor and someday i'll write an ode to my ex's instagram or something and you'll anoint me your spiritual successor in rhythmic angst.

i nominate odradek!

[bels]

Hurray, strong noir work from odradek. Who do you want to nominate? I guess you could send them a private PM so they knew they were nominated but noone else knew. That'd be fun, maybe?

Current list is

Awaiting Deployment
Stingray

Not Syek

Molasses
Sister Ray
RJB
Maj
Ramseams
Dwindles
Smiles
Bela

Recharging

Schia
Odradek

If other people want to join in there's no reason they can't.

[bels]

soundclip wants to join so imagine he's in that list

[Stingray Sam]

I wrote a poem, hopefully it's not too terrible. a bit nervous about posting it in public. i also apologize for the bad scan

[rjbman]

bumping for WICTW, whose turn is it?

[bels]

Majaximillian stealth nominated someone. Has it been over a week? Just knock something up in your lunch hour whoever you are. Do a 160 character thing if needs be. You ll get another go soon enough

[maj]

i re-sent pm. they are working on it.

[can-]

sam your handwriting is nuts.

[RycePooding]

I'm in a poetry writing class, and it's really impossible to tell if my poetry is fundamentally sound, 'good,' or whatever else.

The teacher is supportive, but it's impossible to tell what he actually thinks. Really frustrating.

[bels]

What is care tags wearing is going like great guns. I am pleased

[bels]

Dwindles has nominated me but I'm on holiday and don't want to write something on a phone keyboard (does my head in) so I will nominate ramseams

[bels]

Current list is
ting Deployment
Stingray

Not Syek

Molasses
Sister Ray
RJB
Ramseams
Smiles
Bela
Soundclip
Recharging

Schia
Odradek
Dwindler
Major John

[adhi]

this is going to be a great thread. i'll have something for you guys soon. (busy with COLLEGE ESSAYS. anyone want to look at an essay or two of mine?)

[can-]

i've edited so many of my friends application essays, i wouldn't mind

[bels]

Does ramseams know he is nominated I tried to pm him but I don't think it worked. Someone else try?

[ramseames]

Oh Fuck wow I dropped the ball. Sorry everyone. I'll post one by tonight.

[rjbman]

bump for whoever's next for wictwt

[bels]

It's meant to be Soundclip. Post up or renominate soundclip.

[edward]

[rjbman]

Really not a fan of the gigantic exposition paragraph. Show, don't tell.

[soundclip989]

[bels]

Smiles you're up for the next WICTW I believe.

soundclip I think you could lose "invisible" from invisible strings, "thin" from think blanket.

The sentence "Everyone else can sense it, you don’t know what it is, but it makes your insides seize with aversion." feels a bit clunky to me.

I like the last line about the doctor.

[smiles]

Sorry guys didn't realise I was nominated.I'm still in it.

[bels]

Sort it out cosco.

[smiles]

in the spirit of continuity i nominate